The Lake of Salty Tears
The lake of salty tears
slowly filled throughout the years
tears of loss and tears of pain
tears of fear fall down like rain
the currents within will drown your soul
tremendous waves rise and fall
sinking further to despair
the depths are calling me with their glare
i filled this lake with pain and fear
my salty lake my salty tears

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Roxanna   Roxanna wrote
on 5/10/2011 12:42:43 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qTcGq6XOd1I heres my first attempt at reading my poems outloud on youtube

Miryka   Miryka wrote
on 3/1/2009 7:51:37 AM
reading this i cud jus picture a person dressed in black lying on a rock feet in the lake n crying! What a beautiful picture i may try n draw it! xx

Anyafay   Anyafay wrote
on 1/12/2009 2:45:24 PM
Lovely Roxy!

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