Feeling Fragile
Feeling fragile, Feeling weak!
I'm so tired yet i cant sleep,
delicate tears falling down.
a fake smile hids an underling frown,

NO POINT in fighting not anymore,
we crawl to the top but get thrown back to the floor!
what is the point? i need to know
i want to run away but theres no-where to go!

no place to flee and no place to hide,
i just feel fragile and empty inside.
i do NOT want to burden my friends,
with my pain and suffering that never ends.

i dont want to live, yet dont want to die,
i need somewhere far to which i could fly.
what do i do? where can i turn?
living in the wild survival ive learnt.

feeling abandoned and again rejected,
looking back i have now reflected,
my life is a game with fucked up rules,
and i just cant win..theres too many fools


Comments:
 
Anyafay   Anyafay wrote
on 3/1/2009 3:09:36 PM
As an English teacher, I work harder to accept the lack of apostrophes and capitalisation of 'I'; but perhaps the erratic punctuation reflects the erratic thought process provoked by despair and and unravelling of convention...maybe - or maybe taht is incredibly poncy and I should just go to bed!

Miryka   Miryka wrote
on 3/1/2009 7:37:39 AM
Omg u read me mind! Love it babe x

penname   penname wrote
on 2/28/2009 6:46:22 PM
reminds me of the old song..."feeling groovy" but the opposite. this was raw and original. i see the difference in the style and of course tone. emotion at the front of the rollercoaster as its coming down at full speed.

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An older poem, written when younger, and in a different emotional place!
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