LEAVE ME BE

 Dreams come and go but reality is always here to prove

that it will never be possible to find honesty in anyone

Why was I so foolish to believe that you really could

have cared?

 

I just want one to prove me wrong

I dont believe there is any that exist

I will only be good enough for only

one thing to any of you wont I?

Then why even bother to pretend

Just do the deed and leave me be!!!!!!!!

 

written  7/8/11

Comments:
 
OneVoice   OneVoice wrote
on 10/28/2013 12:23:33 PM
Allow truth, justice and honesty live in YOU. Learn your 'true value' none can take away. Look not entirely for the approval of others for ' validation'... see yourself as your best friend having uncompromising love and respect for your 'true worth' has. Should you manage this... only then will you be cognizant of the nature and true love of your 'better angels' and Heavenly Father

roadtripper523   roadtripper523 wrote
on 8/23/2011 9:09:17 PM
. . .been there. . .

Rhiannon   Rhiannon wrote
on 7/12/2011 8:43:14 AM
Thanks Star I really enjoy your comments cuz they mean a lot coming from such a gifted writer :)

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 7/11/2011 12:00:22 AM
Short, direct and to the point. The frustration just jumps out at you and that is what makes this even more stronger emotionally. I think we all can relate to your feelings here very well.

Rhiannon
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