Inside
You criticize my mind
Now you start to find
That all you hated
Isn't faded
Now the truth breaks out...

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Conflicteddreamer   Conflicteddreamer wrote
on 11/11/2012 4:15:50 PM
Sounds like the beginning of a song. You could make this longer.

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Written to the beat of "Right Now" by KoRn. So you can substitute "I'm feeling mean today/ Not lost, not blown away/ Just irritated and quite hated/ Self control breaks down" with this and it still sounds natural.
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