All in All..
i've been in love
touched the stars
dreamed the dreams
that once was ours
i've felt the surge
of true romance
known the joy
took the chance
and all in all
i'd have to say
i was blessed
love came my way
 
i've seen the mountains
and walked the seas
i've seen the forests
filled with trees
my eyes have captured
the valleys deep
i've stood in awe
of winding creeks
and all in all
i'd have to say
i was blessed
to come this way
 
i've met people
who've touched my heart
who walked with me
till time to part
i've seen the worst
the best of man
and learned that i'm
no different than 
and all in all
i'd have to say
i'm wiser now
than yesterday
 
i've lived my life
with few regrets
and those i have
i won't forget
i've followed the sun
followed the wind
took every path
to it's end
and all in all
i'd have to say
i was not great
but,just ok
 

Comments:
 
WAN   WAN wrote
on 6/17/2009 11:41:25 AM
;D You are welcome rain:)

Rain   Rain wrote
on 6/17/2009 11:20:17 AM
Thanks Wan, That was nice of you. Rain..

WAN   WAN wrote
on 6/17/2009 9:06:56 AM
very nice...very clear message:) Loved it!

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