FOREVER MORE
  

Forever More

 

I dream of darkness in the dead of the night

Coming closer and closer taking shape within sight

 

Traveling within my dreams with speed and such grace

Winds blowing jet black hair whipping light as lace.

 

Muscles contoured, showing strength, defined by full moonlight

Head held high, legs outstretched, this black stallion within sight.

 

As he gallops through the valley passing by the big oak tree

I sit upon the branch so high, waiting, he cannot see.

 

I hear his breathe as he searches the land; his eyes seem full of rage.

His gait is strong, determined, for this union to engage.

 

With the speed of light he turns around as if, I’ve called to him,

And I see his eyes soften as I take flight from this limb.

 

With wings outstretched I greet him as I land upon his back

Our union forever more on this night so dark and black

 

 

 

April 22, 2007

 


Comments:
 
betty_b_ready   betty_b_ready wrote
on 5/6/2008 2:43:53 PM
I did enjoy "Forever More" and the final revelation of point of view was fun.

lindsay   lindsay wrote
on 5/6/2008 9:41:09 AM
I really liked this. It has a great rhythm and flow. You also have chosen very descriptive, visual words. Nice job!

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