Now
Now

Onward our soldiers march, hear there beat
On foot they have walked, shuffled feet
Upon the roads of defeat
For some, just a repeat
Floors of desert heat
Bring home complete
All our fleet
Retreat
Now

Bonnetta Rohde 8/10/05
All my poetry, and other writings are all legally ©Copyrighted before posting


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StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 2/27/2010 7:51:26 PM
I like the rhyme you use at the end of your sentences. That was well done, as the message in this poem. Good job for your first post here.

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Now

Onward our soldiers march, hear there beat
On foot they have walked, shuffled feet
Upon the roads of defeat
For some, just a repeat
Floors of desert heat
Bring home complete
All our fleet
Retreat
Now

Bonnetta Rohde 8/10/05
All my poetry, and other writings are all legally ©Copyrighted before posting
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