What's new?
Intense
Empty
Alone
Lost
Confused
Attached
In lust
In love
All these feelings bottled up inside
Nothing really changing but nothing staying the same
Nothing left but my hope and dreams leading my life
All these feelings make my mind go numb
All these feelings need to get the fuck out
Follow my conscience? Can't do that anymore
Wrong from right? How do you really know
Walking the streets in the city of no love, no
trust, and no control, just my music to hold me
together giving me the memories I love but don't
want anymore


Comments:
 
StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 12/7/2008 10:52:00 PM
The confusion you show here is something we all have felt, and Jamisvu still feels. I wish you both the best. I also like how you express your feelings here.

Moonrose   Moonrose wrote
on 12/4/2008 5:29:07 PM
Melancholy and haunting in a way... good job. I can relate to it to many points.

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