Complication
Like a black vault being exploded inside.
So much anger and commotion coming alive.
The deep secrets below the soul.
The screaming, the pushing, the torment, the disturbance.
Between two bodies this takes place.
Now the darkness shows the face.
And just in a burst she's in her room with blood descending her scalp.
What has she done to herself? 
She guiltily mutilated herself. She felt as if her life was over.
Putting down her head she thinks and realizes something.
Life is a one time chance. It's precious.
And even if someone is pernicious to it, block them from
the way, because everyone deserves happiness.



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StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 12/7/2008 10:48:21 PM
Dark and foreboding yet it shows hope at the end. I liked the descriptions for they were very good.

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