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I was the mountain
you were the rain
You were the drummer
and I the song
Now I am the night
shattered by the dawn

scattered over stone

left to be washed away
by the warm blue rain


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djc   djc wrote
on 8/30/2009 8:08:54 PM
Nice poem, some great imagery and metaphors here. Keep writing!!!

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