da love bug
You'll catch it you know
this bug comes and it goes
but once you catch it you'll know
you've been caught
this bug flies up above spreading it's
potion of love and this is something
in which you have no control

So if he can give it to you
then he can take it back too
therefore you should give him his
all due respect
because if you are lucky to keep it
you'd better know how to treat it
or this love bug will leave you with
nothing but pain



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StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 3/2/2009 3:21:22 AM
I like this for it's pleasure and pain. You summed it up on the last verse. And how true it is! Good job!

penname   penname wrote
on 2/12/2009 8:28:40 PM
i love the form, the shape and tone in this. it almost seems like a sphynx riddle or sorts. i love the title, its cute, full of whimsy and the poem with its perplexity made me smile and think. love...bitter sweet, but often better sweet too. splendid writing.

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