without mixed emotion we humans produce nothing...i love that profound line. the poem is great. a very straightforward title about content that i've not seen much in poetry...at least not directly. i like the use of the word "shell" - that's perfect. the only line (this is the english lit coming out in me) that I would've liked better (flow wise) would be "will cause your body to uncontrolably shake" - make your body completely shake sounds a bit awkward for the rest of this well written poem. i love the flow and the style. again, unique and also awesome. - you challenge a reader to really feel.