Beach

Car trip

Images blur with speed

Strange comment

Overflowing laughter: spilling out of an open window and trailing behind

 never leaving us

Bags on laps

We are ready

Sun beats down hard and strong

The oceans whispers relief into our ears

Feet cooled

Hearts filled: there is no chance of emptiness today.

Lying surrounded by you all,

Sand mottles our skin

Strange tan lines

Smiling laugh lines

Always had the best times

on the beach with you guys






Comments:
 
rbouncha   rbouncha wrote
on 6/5/2011 4:09:43 PM
ah i like the beach poems lines a great way of describing the scenery and thoughts about traveling. I didn't like the last line though.

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