Blind Sighted

Blind Sighted


Yes, she was a ‘playful creature’ whose ‘blue eyes’ just like the sea

Whose calm ‘subtle charms’ and warming arms could chain men’s fantasy

She fell hard for ‘Sergeant-Major’ who would ‘well’ exact her ‘treat’

And would ‘ever’ leave her ‘longing’ for ‘grand-tricks’ he’d dole – replete



She was known the ‘teasing temptress’ whose smooth words would breed ‘false’ hope

By her ‘undulating passions’ driving good men ‘down a slope’

She’d get ‘drunk’ from men’s attention… their ‘obsessions’ fueled her drug

Which ‘felt’ ever strong as ‘climax’ - compliments... her ribbed ‘sex-plug’



At first meet… we thought her ‘cutie’; hesitation ruled the day

Was there something ‘bout her ‘charming smile’ which ‘warned’ our spirit 'way

Did we sense ‘something’ improper though we'd never scribe with name

Or was ‘mischief’ in the ethos,,, warning - ‘leave the way you came’



Jewel was ‘fishing’ for a ‘fill-guy' mid her bleak 'relations-gapped’

Please her tortuous obsessions... fueled from 'lusts'... she'd longed were tapped

By some ‘glimmer of projection’ which we 'thought' was worth her wait

We'd made plans to 'trick her treaty'… sad, we were a 'smidge' too late



Sad… we did not read her ‘tea leaves’… nor gave ‘heed’ our ‘inner guide’

Soo in search 'our' true obsession who would one-day walk our side

Desperate ‘seemed’ some ‘future choices’… desperate ‘felt’ a future - grim

We’d much later gleaned her ‘candy’ had been ‘all-consumed’ with him



We did ‘launch’ an inquisition… we 'strong' warned her well enough

Yet our many ‘words of wisdom’ only ‘brazed' her will - more tough

Jewel would ‘solely’ heed such warnings just to ‘mitigate' said risks

Thus, she’d justify ‘deposits as investments’ through lust’s ‘fiscs’



Yes, it really is ‘astounding’ how 'some' women love to talk

About unresolved recurring themes which drive most men to squawk
No… "It's not the destination, it’s the journey"… some might say
Though most 'manly interactions' seldom operate this way



Yes, we’d say whatever's on our mind - our tongue unbridled speaks

So the truth comes out... it hurts sometimes; We’d watch as havoc reeks
Oh, we’d show our hurt and temperament as freely as a child
Yet, because we’re all ‘grown up and stuff’… we’d 'sport' our 'adult' style



Yes, she wants to hear those 'pretty words’ that makes her ‘feel’ so good

No, you can't display an attitude - you'll be misunderstood
So, just ‘mind your mouth’, don't get upset, agree with what she thinks
And should you be poised to ‘brave these games’… it might drive ‘you’ to drink



And so - yes… It is expected… that we men should ‘always’ hear
Give kind words our understanding and support her through her fear
Please examine… not too closely - do ‘not’ criticize her ways…
Thus, should 'we' well do this long enough… she'll shower endless praise



Jewel’s ‘old-flame’ fast come to 'calling' – what he’d crave was ‘more the same’

He’d become lust's ‘new-addiction; with ‘great sex’ he’d ‘fuel her flame’

They’d both wanted ‘something different’; both they sought each something – new

He’d ‘escape’ his tortured marriage… she hoped change her ‘plain' world view



By past lusts 'then' re-emerging … Jewel soon put ours ‘fast to bed’

Strong her ‘sweet love’ craved more ‘candy’ thus she'd don her ‘tables-spread’

Hopeless were her ‘split-affections’; doomed were they right from - our start

‘Lust’s-convictions’ crushed hope's chances... future ‘treasure-hunts' seemed smart



We ‘felt’ burned and rendered useless like ‘worn sheets’ placed on a shelf

Pushed aside and sore discarded - ‘ripe stains' marred our mental health

As we’d ‘move to terms’ - then forward…  taking ‘count the costs our worth

Jewel’s ‘gross-acts’ viewed - spent and futile… helped us ‘seek’ less ‘engrossed earth’



We've sore gleaned this ‘clear conclusion’... true you can't change someone's mind

Almost certainly ‘most’ woman in whose hearts strong lusts - you’ll find
Thus no matter what you say to them – ‘his love’ their hearts beats for
Well… there's no amount of attitude to ever win that war


©2017  NDL II



Comments:
 
DiamondNDaRuff   DiamondNDaRuff wrote
on 12/29/2009 1:07:40 PM
I truely enjoyed this. You found the right collection of words to express what can be so difficult for some to say. Thank you for an enjoyable read.

Moonrose   Moonrose wrote
on 12/27/2009 6:47:55 PM
This was an enjoyable read and so true, unfortunately. Great job!

markBrad   markBrad wrote
on 12/27/2009 10:42:21 AM
My kind of poetry, loved it

SUKIE   SUKIE wrote
on 12/27/2009 10:18:07 AM
It's quite a struggle here to be a man or a woman. We all need to RESPECT or we all end up going to a drinking party.

shakatoah   shakatoah wrote
on 7/31/2009 10:01:11 AM
How's it going, my friend? Have you been getting yourself into trouble speaking the truth in love? I've been doing that a bit myself lately so I know the frustration it evinces, and which you express so well here. If someone isn't ready to hear the truth, then it simply won't be heard...maddening. And I hope the answer to Zaidsong's question about stretching across the gender divide is 'yes'. Good to read you again.

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... a caution to a determined heart
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