BRIEF SORROW
  

you hurt me so badly I could not help but cry
my heart is broke, it's bleeding, I hate the reason why
I can not believe you said those hurtful things to me
your anger was wrongfully stirred, I hope you come to see
for you I have nothing but love not a single word of spite
but I guess that is not mutual, but I don't care, it's alright
my life for you is so deep it's a flame that burns so bright
petty words can't harm it they burn instantly on site
yeah sure the ashes get in my eyes and oh what a frightful sting
but afterward your love showers down and I’m grateful for the relief it brings

 


Comments:
 
danicpa68   danicpa68 wrote
on 4/23/2008 4:18:24 PM
This is so deep and well done!!

lindsay   lindsay wrote
on 4/19/2008 12:08:46 AM
Great rhyme scheme.

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Lifes a bitch.
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How I feel when my boyfriend gets mad at me
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3/8/2008 12:00:00 AM
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