Suicide Confession

Mentally as a teen I was losing my mind
reasons for living far gone behind
Sitting by this window
I could just jump out of
with no dream or hope to fly like a dove
weighing my options to keep on livin
my main focus is to erase this pain I'm givin
Out of no where,
I become aware
of a project at school that's due
essay and presentation, that's an A times two

Here now let me make my suicide confession
education and literature, it's my obsession
how can it not be, it saved my life
still giving me a chance to be a wife
a mother and a friend
intelligent, kind, there for you until the end

As you read these words don't think it's a prediction
cause thses thoughts I share are not a work of fiction

Let's say my obsession hand't kept me from making that jump
then I couldn't put my pen to paper and pump...

Out the motivation you need
to help you proceed
My brother my sister
never be a quitter
hold your head up high
your reason for livin is higher then then the sky
keep faith in the higher power
with him any stress you can devour

Putting this pen to paper is truly an obsession
hope you got the message from Poetic's Suicide Confession

vwhitlock   vwhitlock wrote
on 9/16/2008 3:32:40 PM
Words from the heart...more powerful than blood! You inspire me!

Tiny   Tiny wrote
on 8/24/2008 11:43:59 AM
Firstly thanks for sharing. With the pressures all around today it takes alot to turn things around, god blessings and stay strong.

danicpa68   danicpa68 wrote
on 8/22/2008 6:37:23 AM
Beautifully written. Not so many took the path that you did. You are a brave woman and I'm so glad you shared this with us.

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 8/22/2008 3:43:53 AM
Warriorprincess says it all. I need not say more.

Warriorprincess55   Warriorprincess55 wrote
on 8/21/2008 3:17:27 PM
Brovo! I am so proud of you for sharing this with us. May God continue to bless you!

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Laid back young woman who's very mature with a poetic soul
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This poem is a true story about me. Today many teens feel the way I once felt and i hope this poem touches someone who may be making the wrong choice about ending their life. If you know a depressed teen or any one in trouble with suicide. Feel free to have them read this. Maybe it will change their mind and also develop a passion for literature like I did.
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8/20/2008 12:00:00 AM
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