racing
VERSE
why is the city so dark tonight?
or am i just blinded by you
and the fact that i'm holding
the most beautiful heart in my hands
but i can't stand
the part where i'm holding it from a distance
your light's so far away
but i'm finally moving on
to you

CHORUS
My heart is racing over silhouettes
Of buildings and streets
And when it collides with the colors of love
That's where we'll meet

VERSE
baby i'm hanging outside your window
weightless and held by the stars
and if i lean close enough
i'm hoping to see your bright face
oh how my heart'll race
the world will soak in the glow
of the light and the love from your eyes
and that never gets old
to me

CHORUS

BRIDGE (...I've yet to write that lol)

(CHORUS or VERSE, undecided... maybe neither, straight to the outro... lol all depends on how the BRIDGE or whatever sounds :P)

OUTRO (?)
and then all the lands
will clap their hands
in time to our heartbeats
and then we'll be free
just you and me
to fill the skies with our melodies [2x]

and then all the lands [my heart is racing]
will clap their hands [over silhouettes]
in time to our heartbeats [of buildings and streets]
and then we'll be free [and when it collides]
just you and me [with the colors of love]
to fill the skies with our melodies [that's where we'll meet, where we'll meet]
END


Comments:
 
Conflicteddreamer   Conflicteddreamer wrote
on 10/20/2012 11:16:24 AM
Awesome! I mean it, too!

sandee_ye   sandee_ye wrote
on 8/16/2010 2:57:56 PM
Very nice!

SUKIE   SUKIE wrote
on 8/5/2010 6:13:25 AM
I love your simple wording of lyrics, and I guess that's how it's supposed to be. Melody that goes on top becomes compliment while sometimes poems to me, in general, are too deep, too much to handle. I love the bridge you have created. Please keep on working, I would like to hear after you finish putting frosting on top!

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Song I'm working on... posting it so I don't forget (I'd lose it if I wrote it down elsewhere lol), and it never hurts to see if anyone has any feedback. Hope you enjoy what I have so far ^.^
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