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I believe this life is heaven to me
And ill defend it as long as i continue to be
This is my life and ill fight to keep it whole
Even when trouble n dispare begin to take there toll
So challenge me i dare and see what i can do
Cuz maybe my world isnt for you
But ill battle for it with every breath left in me
And one day this life will set me free.


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StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 3/2/2009 2:36:41 AM
Well said. A message for the day. I know one day we will all be free.

penname   penname wrote
on 3/1/2009 12:35:45 PM
wonderful poem. the speaker in this poem seems free already. this short poem was invigorating and had a great voice and tone. i love this style.

Miryka   Miryka wrote
on 3/1/2009 11:56:32 AM
fanx huni! n its kinda a hapi one babe jus like u asked for! xx

Roxanna   Roxanna wrote
on 3/1/2009 11:54:52 AM
awwwwwwwww, you shall one day be free my hun!! x lovely short but sweet it says what you want to say without dragging on!!

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