Shine
I would wrap my dreams around you,
If you feel all I am feeling too.
I could be your mirror, I could make you smile
Like you make me smile.

As we try to make sense of our lives,
Should we blame fate or choice for all our desires?
Let me be your mirror, let me make you smile
Like you make me smile.

You make me shine.

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poetrydances   poetrydances wrote
on 11/8/2008 5:13:47 AM
Loved the feeling of this piece- another great write-full of depth with so few lines. As before: Just to let you know as well - your poem has been linked to from our site poetrydances.com- We find and link to great poems all across the Internet. We would like to add you as a favorite writer on the site- if you are interested all you need to do is go to www.poetrydances.com/seenyourpoem.htm and follow the steps. If not that's fine too of course, and we wish you continued success with your writing. Kind regards Tony @ www.poetrydances.com

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 11/6/2008 3:18:31 PM
Short yet so deeply written. I like poem like this for they are simple yet say so much and mean so much. To me that is a sign of brilliance when a writer can do this.

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