24 Hours

In my lone Morns,
Of countless "if's",
I know by Noon,
The fog will lift.

In these bright hours,
That lay ahead:
In sun, through showers,
I will not dread:
 
My dreams adrift
This coming Night,
As Dawn will sift,
And give them light.


Comments:
 
JMariah   JMariah wrote
on 5/22/2011 4:33:52 PM
This is a very powerful poem of hope. I enjoyed it thoroughly.

Jan   Jan wrote
on 8/15/2009 9:22:38 PM
very creative, short but meaningful..thanks for the read..

WAN   WAN wrote
on 8/15/2009 8:56:35 PM
i like this one as well( the lines are shorter yet more clear) the rhyming is good too. I really admire you Michele. Great poem!

Michele
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"...a poem a day, keeps the shrink away!"

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Synopsis
From "Ink Melodies". A variation on an old children's prayer, based on strength, and continuance.
Published Date
7/21/2009 12:00:00 AM
Published In
Ink Melodies
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