Just More Anger
There's a pool of disdain
Dripping on my heart
Giving way to hate
My eyes are looking at you

Have I mentioned lately
you drive me crazy
Everything about you
screams don't blame me
Because you're a self-proclaimed
man of many things
No education needed
Your warnings should be heeded
Because your outlooks unique

All these things you say are wrong
But your convictions strong
You see yourself in the right
Never pick the fight
But never back down
You'll stand your ground
Even proven wrong
Your conviction's strong

You say so many things
Under appreciated words that "sing"
Over looked is how you feel
I see a different deal
Self-appreciation and wondrous admiration
I see failure

All these things you say are wrong
But your convictions strong
You see yourself in the right
Never pick the fight
But never back down
You'll stand your ground
Even proven wrong
Your conviction's strong



Comments:
 
McGills   McGills wrote
on 1/10/2012 5:33:04 PM
@vwhitlock: Interesting thought! I like it!

vwhitlock   vwhitlock wrote
on 1/5/2012 9:17:46 PM
Have you thought about using this verse for the chorus? Have I mentioned lately you drive me crazy Everything about you screams don't blame me Because you're a self-proclaimed man of many things No education needed Your warnings should be heeded Because your outlooks unique I loved the read but I think this really stands out and gets the point across, it also flows so well!

Writer_Girl1234   Writer_Girl1234 wrote
on 8/12/2011 6:18:07 PM
i like it

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