Hate Me

Don’t look at me

Don’t talk to me

Don’t say anything you don’t want to me

I don’t care

But don’t tell me that you love me

Don’t say you want me back

Don’t expect me to believe any of your lies

The truth is in your eyes

You’re full of shit

Your blue eyes should be brown

You don’t give a damn about me

You don’t like the look of my face

The glares and stares say more than you want them to

I know you

And I know you better than you want me to


Comments:
 
sagitta   sagitta wrote
on 8/9/2011 3:27:07 AM
Agreed. It has flow and force. I like it.

John_Drydin   John_Drydin wrote
on 4/19/2011 12:34:13 PM
if you wish to be pungent be brief. for it is with words as it is with sun beems, the more they are condensed, the deeper they burn. ~john dryden (the origional)~ I bet some one is burning up right about now, nice work.

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