I love you

I love you

 

I love you is not a game

A foolish words or name

When I said I love you

I mean it baby

When I said I care for you

It’s true! You’re in my mind everyday

 

I know he already owns you

I know your heart beats for him

I know that he is your life

Your dreams in your every night

You are so in love with him

And it hurts me! Made my day so dim…

 

I blame God for he made you

So beautiful, so sexy and wonderful

My female body is not for me

I need to ask him to change it for me

But I can’t and he can’t

This is my life, my worst destiny

 

Every night, I think of you

Every day, I dream of you

But you are not for me

And I am not for you

But please let me say these words

I love you…

 

 

 Margarette@winchester

 

 


Comments:
 
Ve   Ve wrote
on 7/7/2009 3:04:37 AM
Aw that is a sad one. Yey you wrote for wan she is lovely isn't she? That last verse is the strongest one i think. the repetition and reflection of the words makes it bounce along into the inevitable end which you close of nicely with love.

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 6/24/2009 11:59:14 PM
Very touching and emotional. A lucky person to be thought of like this! Reminds me of one I wrote on this site titled "What Did He Do?".

WAN   WAN wrote
on 6/14/2009 5:02:00 AM
I think you forgot to write the letter d in the last line of first paragraph of your poem( the word mine instead of mind). I know he already own you- i think you have to put the letter s after the letter n of your word own...But beside of all the minor errors. Its very sweet. Thank you so much again margie...

WAN   WAN wrote
on 6/14/2009 4:58:06 AM
Oh thank you so much, margie for the sweet thoughts but I am not in to any female like me:( But thank you for writing and taking time making this for me. I really appreciate it.

MW
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Im Margarette- half filipina and half american. Im new to this website but Im sure Im very welcome here.:) see ya!
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