Poetry from the Heart

God's Crystals

Two crystals, each of sand
As a mystery, together they stick
Each crystal crystal from a different land
As one does tock the other will tick

Now they are a pair
And love adds more crystals
They've found something so rare
Only the Heavens are so mystical

The crystals have now grown
And become a strong healthy dune
Thanks to the wind, from where they were thrown
As their love grows, smiles brighten the moon

Over time, finally together and complete
Hearts once broken, which love has now thawed
Cycle now complete, the love they've reaped
'Twas formed by then gentle hand of God



Comments:
 
jpoppell   jpoppell wrote
on 12/1/2009 7:55:40 PM
This is a great poem! Keep writing, I like your style.

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 12/1/2009 3:34:18 AM
Well versed. I like the style that you used here for I think it is eloquent. I also like the fact that we share something in the romantic poetry writing. Rock on!

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