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Days of the sunset always fade
the raining clouds never go away
you'll find me here every hour the same
tomorrow here love please stay

If loving him means that I am to blame
If longing him mean I am to be ashamed

Tonight a time of another no sleep
don't want to dream of her lips on your cheeks
I miss the way you made me feel

We're very busy living our lives
someone always gives up
can you at least stay in mine

If wanting him means a heartache
If wanting him means I am to bleed

He is the medicine, I am all the pain

Could this happen when you said
you'll never say goodbye
I'm wondering here why you're telling others hi

These nights not dreaming
I'm fighting these tears
having all my friends tell me
he's the one causing all fears

If holding him means I am to be blind
If holding him means he'll be my guide

Don't want to let him go
desiring someone as so

If him being right means he's leaving
well I wish he would be wrong

Yet... he is the sunlight,
the sunlight is gone

leaving me hear to find another song

Comments:

		StarPoet wrote on 1/11/2010 12:38:45 AM
		MMR is so right and her compliment I agree with. To be praised like that is to know that you wrote something extraordinary.

		StarPoet wrote on 1/11/2010 12:37:21 AM
		As I read this, I could see this as a song. Set to music, I think this would sound good. I like the medicine and pain line. Imagination at work and it shows.