Night Moon
The diamonds of the blue ocean are shimmering tonight,
natures breath is still on my dead cold body,
the pale skin golf ball so high on the sky looks so mighty yet he is lonely,
all alone the diamonds never come near him,
they say the reason he only shows half of himself is because of the clouds,
but i think it's because he's hiding,
hiding the side he's so trying to keep.


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lauralee   lauralee wrote
on 12/9/2009 10:40:07 PM
and isn't the hidden side the one everyone else thinks they want to get to know?

JGM81192   JGM81192 wrote
on 12/7/2009 1:00:21 PM
This one hits home. Straight to the center Of the where it all began.

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Synopsis
metaphor poetry
Published Date
3/21/2008 12:00:00 AM
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