Heartbeat
I want to feel your heartbeat...
Puffs of white air from heavy breaths could be seen had anyone been around. Sweat poured down a pale face, leaking into dull, lifeless eyes.
I want to feel your heartbeat...
Pale, bony hands become fists on the soaked pavement. The rain runs red with blood as it soaks the boy's body. The sobbing grows louder, but no one's around to hear.
I want to feel your heartbeat...
The blade of a switchblade gleams in the shallow amount of sunlight filtering through the clouds. A deep inhale.
I want to feel your heartbeat...
A loud cry of pain is heard as the blade is plunged deep in the boy's chest.
I want to feel your heartbeat...
No. More. Heartbeat.

Comments:
 
rbouncha   rbouncha wrote
on 6/7/2011 11:26:19 PM
Ah a riveting sound of one heartbeat.

Naomi   Naomi wrote
on 5/27/2011 7:20:17 PM
A captivating poem.. about a subject not many people want to write about. This is the view of the predator. However, you seem to have a way with words, and I would like to read more of your works on a lighter subject... :)

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Synopsis
About ten people read this before I posted it, and none of them understood it: A boy is bloody and it's raining. The rain washes away the blood on him. He then kills himself.
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