Pieces
I wanted you to have all of me
All of the love in my heart and soul
But I fell so hard for you
That I no longer feel whole.
Our first kisses on the beach
Made my knees to weak to stand
Love broke my heart into pieces
And they fell into the sand.
More pieces fell between the sheets
Where we laid together every night
Feeling every single beat of your heart
And your warmth as you held me tight.
For every tender kiss you gave me
Every happy moment we got to share
More and more pieces of me fell away
And were left scattered everywhere.
I always knew how it would end
We had other lives to go back to.
But knowing that it was coming
Didn’t make leaving easier to do.
Our last kisses tore me apart
So full of love, loneliness and pain,
And more broken pieces scattered
With my tears that fell on the plane.
I never thought that loving you
Could ever hurt me this much
But what’s left of me is broken
From you being too far away to touch.
Every moment that I miss you
More pieces of me break off and fall
Please put the pieces back together
I want you to have them all.


Comments:
 
thewritekat   thewritekat wrote
on 5/28/2009 10:17:44 PM
A powerful piece. I liked it.

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 11/2/2008 2:00:17 AM
G-Money was so right. So sad yet so touching. Your emotion jumped off the screen and into my heart.

G_Money   G_Money wrote
on 11/2/2008 12:23:03 AM
lovely

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Synopsis
Love hurts, especially when you know that you can't keep it. This is about knowing that your falling in love, that everything you ever need is right there with in one person, but you can't have it. So every moment you feel yourself falling deeper and deeper in love, pieces of that love, of yourself fall off and choose to stay where it happened, where you were happy until eventually your left in so many pieces that you don't feel whole...
Published Date
10/30/2008 12:00:00 AM
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