Insight
  Consolation: desparation
taken years to decide
consequence: recompense
into which I do collide
detriment: obstinate
not heeding their advice
their dominion, their opinion
I suppose it should suffice
unfinished, unhappy, unsatisfied
the well of contention finally supplied
getting up or getting close
this road is just so long
so I could say "I told you so"
I´ve proven myself wrong
redirection: introspection
unsure of what I´ll find
conformity: sure to be
more than what´s behind

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LauraYvette   LauraYvette wrote
on 5/19/2008 11:09:00 AM
That's more like it! Thanks so much guys!! That makes me feel validated (even tho I know it probably shouldn't take comments to do that, lol) Thanks! Most Sincerely!!

Warriorprincess55   Warriorprincess55 wrote
on 5/19/2008 8:26:34 AM
Another great piece of work. Don't worry about not getting comments. Believe me, they will start rolling in. People are afraid of the truth as well as things that they do not, or can not understand. You just keep writing because whether you know it or not, your words that are written from your heart, will help others who are in the same position that you are in.

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 5/19/2008 12:25:34 AM
Again so personal. I feel your words and your battles. I respect that you are fighting to get better and control this. I wish you the best. And don't give up writing. You have a message for the world and you speak for many who are in the same position as you.

LauraYvette   LauraYvette wrote
on 5/18/2008 5:30:56 PM
I'm just wondering why no one comments? I would love to hear what my writing says to you, if anything? :)

LauraYvette   LauraYvette wrote
on 5/17/2008 1:49:52 AM
You really seem to understand, I can't tell you how much that means! Thanks lindsay!

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Synopsis
This poem is basically about my decision to conform, which is extremely difficult for me.
A Word from the Writer
I'm finding out little by little that conformity, to a certain degree, is the only way to cope with bipolar disorder successfully. I would love some feedback, thanks!
Published Date
5/17/2008 12:00:00 AM
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