Wither I Go
  

Wither I Go

Alone and empty, only a shell

Once I lived, then I found hell

I lived a dream, and then it died

Cry the souls that know I tried

 

So I sit, broken alone

I’ll be the first to cast a stone

Break my tortured weary head

Wither I go, I am dead


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vwhitlock   vwhitlock wrote
on 6/6/2008 6:02:16 PM
Powerful words...painful words...very worth sharing. Sometimes sad words are more meaningful than happy words. We all have to express what's inside us...or I think we'll blow up...at least that's my theory.

amberfire   amberfire wrote
on 5/30/2008 7:05:31 AM
Your words truly express the sorrow and pain of your experience, one that all of us have known at one time or another. I wish you the ability to walk past it and continue on to find those happy words that will touch the hearts of others as deeply as these do.

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 5/29/2008 12:13:27 AM
Great emotional expression. We all have days like this and it hurts to the core. Remember..."Above the clouds the sun still shines".

Lacuna Eidolon   Lacuna Eidolon wrote
on 5/28/2008 6:16:03 PM
Thank you. Everytime I think I might be feeling better I end up having to see my (ex)wife and her boyfriend - then it starts all over again. Bleah! Sick of it for sure.

danicpa68   danicpa68 wrote
on 5/28/2008 5:23:10 AM
As long as you have the words left to write and the hope that you will one day write happy stuff you are on the road to recover. Excellently written.

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I swear, someday I will write happy stuff. The day I wrote this was obviously not the day. Sorry... : (
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