Revenge

Revenge

 

I knew what you were when I first greeted you

Liar, deceiver, destroyer

I threatened to bury you that day

 

I succumb to your whims, my delightful succubus

I am bewildered, boundaries turn gray

 

I observe you warily since that fateful eve

Liar, deceiver, destroyer

Seeking signs of thievery, contempt

 

Led astray by your whisperings, my divine succubus

I am deceived, these games you play

 

Suddenly your plot was revealed and I faltered

Liar, deceiver, destroyer

My dreams became yours and I mourned

 

Gutted by your stealthy knife, my venomous succubus

I am destroyed, you found the way

 

Now vengeance and hatred pump freely in these veins

Liar, deceiver, destroyer

Your demise I seek with malice and foresight

 

Alone - hopeless and drained, my evil succubus

I am destroyer, I will make you pay


Lacuna Eidolon


Comments:
 
Angeleyez   Angeleyez wrote
on 2/15/2011 10:50:45 AM
totaly my way of thinking! i like it dark and angry

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 12/21/2009 1:06:59 AM
"The best revenge is success in your life". "Get mad, then get determined to do better".

danicpa68   danicpa68 wrote
on 2/16/2009 4:49:46 PM
I do feel the energy but..........it's negative. Turn it around. The best revenge is to get over her and be happy. Just my opinion. I love your poetry.

SapphireCat   SapphireCat wrote
on 1/13/2009 7:04:48 PM
You can feel the energy and emotion pulsing through the lines. Awesome ;)

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Sometimes thinking about returning evil favors feels good. Sometimes it's the only thing that keeps a person going. Sometimes we can just write about it and let it go...
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