My Children
In this time of healing
Open wounds and scars from days gone by
Empty veins, open mind
Take my past, destroy it
Find my future, or die
My children, you are my life
I love you, I give you my eternity

Lacuna Eidolon

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Angeleyez   Angeleyez wrote
on 7/27/2008 12:05:50 AM
thank you dad i love you more than you think i do

danicpa68   danicpa68 wrote
on 5/14/2008 1:49:49 PM
It is true children make it all better. They love their parents unconditionally and are truly a gift from God.

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 5/6/2008 12:14:57 AM
Nicely done Lacuna. And wise advice Monique.

Bumble Bee   Bumble Bee wrote
on 5/4/2008 6:58:39 PM
I agree with Monique. Let your children's love heal you. They are part of your past, present and are your future.

MoniqueT   MoniqueT wrote
on 5/4/2008 3:09:34 PM
Open wounds and scars will be healed by the Love of your children Empty veins will be filled with the blood that is their blood to cos you were lucky enough to give them life There can be no future without the past And remember, if Today you have trouble, that by Tomorrow, Today will already be Yesterday Tomorrow always holds the promise of a second chance, a new beginning.

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