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Hopeless

You live, and I kill you, I kill you

A thousand times, and you’re with me

I cry death, and I kill you, I kill you

A million times, and you’re with me

I bleed agony, and I kill you, I kill you

A Billion times, and you’re with me

I hate you, and I kill you, I kill you

A Trillion times, and you’re with me

Stay away, and I kill you, I kill you

You exist, and you’re with me

Love raped, and I kill you, I kill you

I ‘m ashamed, and you’re with me

Hurt unfathomable, and I kill you, I kill you

I’m changed, and you’re with me

I am flames, and I kill you, I kill you

Impotent murder, and you’re with me

Lacuna Eidolon

Comments:

		life_as_it_is wrote on 4/28/2008 12:28:46 PM
		Perfectly describes the anger of pain.

		Lacuna Eidolon wrote on 4/26/2008 7:12:47 PM
		What does one do when you love someone who hurts you over and over. I would think love would eventually go away. I wanted to stop loving so bad, I wanted to make it go away. Apparently I am not made that way, and maybe no one else is either. I tried very hard to be free of the emotions, before I became free of her. Alas, it happened backwards. I still love her and she is gone. Let the healing begin - maybe someday I'll write happy stuff. : )

		stet wrote on 4/25/2008 5:59:25 PM
		Ooh, I really liked this, it gave me goosebumps! I hope to read more amazing work like this. Alexis

		bookserpent wrote on 4/23/2008 12:40:19 PM
		In terms of style, a masterful piece.

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Synopsis

Making your own love die is just about impossible I've found - I think only another can kill it for you.