Loneliness

Sometimes loneliness breeds here.

When darkness falls

and whispers cease.


My mind wanders,

Like a drifter roaming

without purpose or desire.


Words fall from my lips

twisted and distorted,

never taking on a meaningful shape.


A few inches into eternity,

silence turns to fear

of unrepairable injury.


My faith is faltering,

diminishing our worth,

deforming the bond we share.


I am alone and waiting,

only you know where

to find me.



Comments:
 
djc   djc wrote
on 6/6/2009 8:41:23 PM
Hi LTD This poem is very well written. Lots of emotion and depth. You have great poetic talent! "When darkness falls and whispers cease"~~ beautiful

Starlingpoet   Starlingpoet wrote
on 6/6/2009 2:45:01 PM
You are a very talented writer. You writing really flows nicely and each stanza creates it's own image. Thanks.

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 5/28/2009 5:38:12 AM
I liked this for it felt like it came straight from the heart and it was pure emotion. I think you told this very well.

tigercatracing   tigercatracing wrote
on 5/27/2009 4:43:21 PM
I really enjoyed this. It almost brought me to tears because I have a situation, and it describes how I'm feeling right now.

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