Rainy Day
 The clock ticks,
quietly ticks.

The wind sighs,
quietly sighs.

The rain falls,
quietly falls.

The leaves rustle,
quietly rustle.

The thunder cracks,
loudly cracks.

The rainy day moves on.

Comments:
 
lanaia74   lanaia74 wrote
on 5/30/2008 8:29:10 AM
Short, sweet, and very POWERFUL!

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 5/28/2008 11:49:33 PM
I like poems like this for they are simple and clear. They say one sign of genius is to make the hard things in life easy. Good work!!!!

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