Every Rose
 Every rose is beautiful,

reds and pinks and yellows.

 
Every rose has petals,

delicate and soft.

 
Every rose is unique,

Each petal and leaf different.

 
Every rose has its thorns,

nothing is perfect.


Comments:
 
StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 6/3/2008 10:51:51 PM
Great work! Again to the point and so true. " We can be sad that a rose has thorns or be happy that the thorns have a rose ".

Warriorprincess55   Warriorprincess55 wrote
on 6/3/2008 9:11:35 PM
Beautiful poetry, excellently written and absolutely true! Good for you!

Lacuna Eidolon   Lacuna Eidolon wrote
on 6/3/2008 5:09:29 PM
Nice finish, near perfect. : )

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