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A Knock at My Door

You knock on my door,

I don't want to answer.

You knock on my door,

I run and I hide.

You knock on my door,

asking for forgiveness.

You knock on my door,

you say you are sorry.

You knock on my door,

by opening I forgive.

Comments:

		prettyflower1_73 wrote on 6/4/2008 12:13:14 PM
		This sweet and to the point and that is what I like about this piece of writing. I also like how there is a battle at the beginning and by the end it is solved. The last line is perfect.

		StarPoet wrote on 6/3/2008 10:52:58 PM
		You have a gift of saying so much with so little. Truly extraordinary!

		Warriorprincess55 wrote on 6/3/2008 9:13:24 PM
		Another pice of beautiful work! I love the last line! Bless you!

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