a loss to the kind hearted
Good guys never win
we give up what we want
so she can be happy with him

she wants the guy who's never there
not the guy who always is
No, she wants the guy will never show whether or not he cares

we give everything up for her own sake
in hopes she'll realize how much she means
we give it all up at a cost so high our own happiness for her we fake

the truth is she will never know simply how much we care
the truth is we would give it all up for that girl that we may love
for her the answer is always yes: any time, any reason, any where

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BIDDIXGIRL   BIDDIXGIRL wrote
on 5/6/2010 8:43:14 AM
I like this, it is simple and worded so that anyone can understand your feelings. GOOD JOB!!

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