The Light
A quick flash
from the switch
white to blue to white
all dark.
Empty glass
just sitting
pointed top – cracked edges
all dark.
Nothing lasts
a little spark
black to white
to dark to white
all dark
No more.

Comments:
 
WAN   WAN wrote
on 6/2/2009 11:21:12 AM
thanks for the comments on my poems:)

WAN   WAN wrote
on 6/2/2009 1:37:08 AM
the light, If this is about the Light that glows from the lightbulb (i would say: its very simple) but if this light talks about the life of a human then I would say its really nice and true. Good job.

JimWisneski
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I write because it's how I speak to the world.
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