Re-ver-ber-ate
  

 

Reverberate.

Sound echoes off the walls

of my heart,

Reverberating

Re-beating

            Re-dreaming

Distorting itself

From it’s original wave.

Reverberate.

My heart beating wild

in her presence,

Realizing

Romance

            Reaching

Beating so true to itself

fast and loud.

Reverberate.

Music swarming around

In my mind.

Re-teaming

Re-learning

           Regenerating

To enhance itself

And fill the night.

Re-ver-ber-ate.

The memory of the memory

Of her touch (her skin)

Re-imagining

Re-living,

            Realizing

That her kiss

Reverberates through to my soul.

 


Comments:
 
StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 7/14/2008 3:02:29 AM
I actually liked the repetition of Re. I think it drove the point home. I can relate to a poem like this for I wrote my best poem ("One Gun") in a style like this one.

penname   penname wrote
on 7/13/2008 3:33:24 PM
i really like the meaning and feelings evoked in this. i will say the "re" repetition for me distracted the core and soul of the poem. it really isn't needed, as the poem can stand alone without it. i read it once again without the "re" and it became more powerful a poem for me.

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