More Than This
  

 

I wish

I could hear the words

your heart is speaking.

I wish

I could see the thoughts

your mind is thinking.

 

I have felt

the power of your kiss

and relived the touch

that I miss

and known

that we are made

for more than this.

 

I wish

I could lay quiet

this incredible yearning.

I wish

to stand in the fire

of your passion burning.

 

We have touched

the very heart of bliss

and lived in the moment

of a perfect kiss

for we know

that we deserve

so much more than this.

 


Comments:
 
Tiny   Tiny wrote
on 9/7/2008 8:53:19 AM
It is an invisible mist that got clearer and clearer as I went on. Really enjoyed the journey,thanks. For me it represent the guite conversation one has with oneself. The sealed envelope opened at stanza 3. Well done.

poetrydances   poetrydances wrote
on 8/14/2008 9:56:45 AM
I thought this was exceptional- the rhyme seemed so unforced and natural- I have linked to this on our site at http://www.poetrydances.com/poetrydancesselectedpoems.htm (for August). simplicity itself- and a deeply powerful write. Thanks Tony.

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 8/4/2008 1:29:13 AM
I liked this for it comes from the heart. That quiet yearning we all have felt. Good job!

penname   penname wrote
on 8/3/2008 11:32:55 AM
i fell in love with the first and third stanzas. and of course the poem as a whole is delightful. perfect!

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Love's great realization
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