Like This

I don’t know what to do anymore

I can’t catch my breath

My mind wanders all the time

How do I go on like this?

Each little thing reminds me of you

Each song, each word I read

Just the slightest of things set me off

How can I go on like this?

Every time I think about you my heart gets caught in mythroat

My heart pounds at every word you say or write

My head swims at every thought of you

I love being like this


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Bronkerz   Bronkerz wrote
on 6/1/2012 3:42:44 PM
I really love this. I often feel this way also. I like how you start out with a feeling of a sort maybe dispare?( could just be the way i read it.) and towards the end "i love being like this" makes it that you want to hold onto this feeling forever no matter whats going on. there are a lot of ways you can read this. HeARTache, or Being so inlove. either was very good(:

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