Waterfalls

Waterfalls –

liquefied crystals,

cascading the rocks

so rhythmically.

 

River

waiting patiently

for the unison.


Comments:
 
Rinskinski   Rinskinski wrote
on 8/24/2009 2:52:23 AM
Very magical descriptions!

Michele   Michele wrote
on 8/23/2009 8:39:53 PM
Oooo, nice!

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WISH I COULD DREAM FOREVER


Selene, enchantress of the night,
Chain me with light
To this wonder –
My dream’s zephyr.

Let me drift to a paradise
Where no one lies,
And no disdain
Runs through my veins.

Whisper me Endymion’s curse –
Zeus’ spell verse,
So dire sunbeams
Won’t fail my dreams.
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this is my first try on septolet poem..and my first on a nature topic as well..just trying again :)
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