To My Beloved Friend
To My Beloved Friend

 

Imparted to this pathway is your own cradled grief.

 

Whilst you hide the anger inside your concrete ego,

 

I still see those uncried tears locked in your mind’s cellar

 

Longing that you stop withholding the sorrow and hate.

 

Lies run along this road - your path with no point to rev.

 

But my friend, I will stay on your side and never leave.

 

Even if this walk lasts until we reach forever.


*I may sound like a good-for-nothing friend in this poem but i realized that there really are some problems where you can't give any good advice at all..and all that's left to do is listen to the person..


Comments:
 
Jan   Jan wrote
on 8/20/2009 7:11:14 AM
much thanks to all of you guys.. :)

Michele   Michele wrote
on 8/19/2009 10:44:45 PM
On the contrary--shows unconditional friendship. Pretty tricky with the acrostic once again! Seems to exercise your abilities!

Trenchtownrock   Trenchtownrock wrote
on 8/19/2009 11:47:47 AM
awesome poetry my friend.

WAN   WAN wrote
on 8/19/2009 11:10:56 AM
great, bloody great Jan!!! Its all i can say:)

Rinskinski   Rinskinski wrote
on 8/19/2009 7:42:43 AM
Lovely hidden message! You're getting so good at acrostics, it's not funny! Keep up the good work! (PS) Can we expect to see a quadruple acrostic soon...?

Jan
Poetry
Acrostic
writing Jan
WISH I COULD DREAM FOREVER


Selene, enchantress of the night,
Chain me with light
To this wonder –
My dream’s zephyr.

Let me drift to a paradise
Where no one lies,
And no disdain
Runs through my veins.

Whisper me Endymion’s curse –
Zeus’ spell verse,
So dire sunbeams
Won’t fail my dreams.
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this one's a style of triple acrostic..just trying again..i'm into acrostic these days.. :)
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