turn over into a 6 foot ditch; happiness
  

a cold dark place we know so well

you can feel the shallowness in your soul

the beauty's numb

its all grown old

perferations on a perfect heart

bruises on your soul

make the same mistakes for fun

till no one cares and everyones gone

a graveyard full of shallow souls

you pray for mercy and send yourself to hell


Comments:
 
shesbatty   shesbatty wrote
on 5/1/2008 5:38:15 PM
i agree with lindsay, this has insane imagery. its great. some good symbolism too.

lindsay   lindsay wrote
on 5/1/2008 5:07:32 PM
There is a lot of good imagery in this. I love line 5!

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