Crash

Some people have an energy I used to have but lost.

Doing so much for everyone my own such it has cost.

There is no way to take it back if there is I dont know how.

Will all I did for others be enough to fill me now?

I went to school full-time and worked over after hours,

They thought me Superwoman and now i've lost my powers.

School I had to put on the side work now is hard to do,

What once moved me forward now holds me back like glue

My body all worn down now from draining dry my cup

All with very little warning - I crashed...

That's f*d up!


Comments:
 
StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 9/30/2009 4:35:18 AM
I agree with this for the world will try to wear you down with it's constant demands, which sometimes includes love ones. Society expects a woman to be a Superwoman and when she fails to or finally breaks down then there is someting wrong with her. Now that is truly f*d up!

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Synopsis
Just kind of a general rant about my body wearing down and not being able to do anything about it.
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