A muted scream
I can speak
But I can't scream
It's all so real 
But it's just a dream
More like a nightmare
But I can't wake up
And if I did
How could I make up
such a horrible dream
that feels so real
With death for pain
Too much to deal. 

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StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 8/30/2010 12:32:01 AM
Well written and versed. The pain is there and you are expressing it so to say with your words. I feel with you and for you and still am wishing you the best.

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Synopsis
Sometimes your soul screams too loud for your voice to give it utterance.
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I've been living a nightmare...trying to come to grips with the sudden passing of one of my best friends. The force of the grief has surprised and overwhelmed me.
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