hypocrite

disgruntled
befuddled
by the hypocrisy in my mind
it gnaws through the ropes
only to tie them back up again
only to apologize for the damage
then smirk sardonically
and shred them apart
I constrain myself
only to be free again

 


2008~Tricia A. Walter

 


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StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 12/8/2008 11:39:30 PM
"Hypocrisy in my mind...gnaws throgh the ropes...tie them back up again...only to be free again...Brilliant! How many of us and even people we know ore gulity of this and know it? You tell of one of life's dirty little hidden truths, a truth we don't like to look at ourselves and see, yet it is there. You said so much in so little of a poem and that is once again...Brilliant!

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