An Appeal Sent Through Time

An Appeal Sent Through Time

 

By Elton Camp

 

Homo sapiens sees it was a mistake

So corrective action he tries to take

 

Into the past, his voice does send

To the ancestors of modern men

 

Go back, go back and save the earth

Trouble,  human’s rise has given birth

 

For this “survival of the most fit”

Brought problem more than a bit

 

Please remain content to live in a cave

Then the earth’s future you can save

 

With grunts and growls communicate

To spare the future a most horrible fate

 

Hunters and gathers continue to be

Thus from anxiety you’ll remain free

 

For with a mere pint-sized brain

It is best that all should remain

 

Never discover fire or the wheel

For the future that’s the best deal

 

 

(Just a bit of fantasy)


Comments:
 
Conflicteddreamer   Conflicteddreamer wrote
on 11/3/2012 11:45:33 PM
Yeah, I don't agree with the poem's message, but I liked the complexity nonetheless.

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A bit of evolutionary fantasy.
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