Always Remember
I always remember
Those great memories good
We looked, hugged, and danced
Eye to eye we stood

The good times are forever
Many times so great
I clearly remember
The very first date

Enjoyed some bowling
And breakfast with great talks
Our first and memorable kiss
When to our cars we walks

I remember so much more
And the car show too
Our feelings were great
And our feelings true

(c) 2008 Dwayne M. Kilbourne

Comments:
 
Michele   Michele wrote
on 10/12/2008 8:22:19 PM
Hi, Dwayne--you're a formal rhymer like me!!--thanks for your comment on The Affair, though I couldn't resist editing it again today to a true ABAB, 6/6/6/5. Congratulations on your book--looks wonderful from what I can see on this site. I'm still working on getting a book out--the traditional way, with agent, etc. Get a little frustrated sometimes (see "Perfect") but hangin' in.

Froglvr1982   Froglvr1982 wrote
on 10/12/2008 9:41:56 AM
Well spoken!

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This is the first poem in chapter one of my book, Reflections on Life's Roller Coaster Rides: 100 Poems of Circumstance (ISBN: 9781438923499)
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